Tentoken. Shizuku Tokiha

Name: Tentoken. (Divine Ten Blades)

Type: Zanpaktou
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Details

Affinity/Theme: Water

Spirit Appearance: Tentoken has the appearance of a goddess, wearing all white with pure white eyes and an ethereal mist surrounding her at all times. She has small white wings and long Sea colored hair tied in a ponytail. She appears around 23 years of age and wears only a skirt made of leaves.
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General Abilities: None

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Unreleased Form

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Description: Regular blade. Hand guard is fully round, with indentations along it in the form of a Lunar Calender. Hilt is Blue with a gray cross pattern. Regular Sheathe.

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Shikai: Tentoken.

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Release Command: Dance..Tentoken

Description: Tentoken takes the form of a giant bladed ring. The ring can fit around Shizuku's body from hip to shoulder.

Abilities:

Ability 1: Tentoken can absorb large amounts of water and hold it in the niche set inside the blade. If someone is cut when the niche's are at 50 percent capacity the water is dispelled in a mist and all caught in the mist will become more porous, bleeding out easier.

Ability 2: If a ray of light falls through the ring. It can be mixed with Shizuku's Reiatsu and make a mirror. What ever is reflected in the mirror immediately has an incredible urge to sleep. Most under 3rd seat fall asleep immediately but never for more than a singular hour. (One Hour equals 2 posts.)

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Bankai: Tsuki Tentoken (Moon's Divine Ten Blades)

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Description: Large Bright Blue blade, with 2 crescent moons hinging on the blades.

Abilities:

Ability 1: By rotating the blade a hurricane could be created which could be controlled by Shizuku

Ability 2: By reflecting light off of the blade Shizuku can create mass hypnosis by any who catch the light in their eyes. Sending them to sleep for at least 5 Hours or longer if the light is brighter. (One Hour equals 2 posts.)

Ability 3: It can fire Crescent Moon shaped Slashes out of its blade at any moment cutting through most things in its way.

Bankai: Increases her speed and defense. If placed in a dark area Tsuki Tentoken can produce it's own light depending on how much it has stored for up to 12 hours. (One Hour for Two Posts)

mm I like that picture its nice to have a visual aid. did you draw them yourself?

Thank You. ^_^. I got the Shikai from the internet but my brother drew the Bankai.

We need a water type zanpakuto. Water can be deadly right? XD (i.e. Tsukiumi makes water deadly) Also I do kind of say that because when something is given the title of tsuki it has a lot to do with water. The moon and water's relationship in japanese culture (almost like any other) are in sync.

Your bankai's 2nd ability. How is it that by absorbing light it makes you faster. Logically that wouldn't make any sense. (Albeit anything in bleach makes any sense)

Just for the sake of advice. The provisionary effect of it becoming stronger during a full moon...is that necessary. Seems kind of like avatar. Save for that "Water" benders become stronger under the night and become their strongest during a full moon

Your Zanpakuto Type is an Elemental, Illusion/Mesmeric Type Zanpakuto. So it would seem. The Illusion/Mesmeric portion derives from your Shikai's 2nd Effect.

Revamped for Water and Mysticism. Thanks for the Criticism.

No problem. Would have an immediate response but sleep is required (- 5 GMT Central Time, It should be -5 because of Daylight savings I believe. I get confused by that. ^^; ) You didn't have to really change that. I was just making a note about the whole moon thing. Sorry for my miscontending advice but glad you took away from it.

Good changes. And basically. Approved. One more problem or rather just change to address. Could you change the rate in hours to effect per post?

Rates in the RP due to time (If time is measured) is measured in "effect/result per post."

Love to change things around Bossman. Sorry to keep making you come back for this.

Daijoubu, Daijoubu (It's okay) It's my job. Besides its provides a rate of interest since I really don't have anything better to do anyways. Save for work on a paper. Which I'm doing both at the same time. Which would I prefer....boring paper, or checking up on approval posts. ^^;