Iosle Ocultado [Vaizard]

Name: Ocultado, Iosle
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Actual Age: 18

Race: Vaizard
Rank: Elite Vaizard

Hollow Mask:
The Hollow Mask that Iosle has is like Ichigo's mask really except that the lining is white. And the outside layer is black.

Physical Appearance:

Height: 1.68 meters
Weight: 97 lbs

Skin

Skin color: Pale
Body Sensitivity: Behind Neck
When touched Skin feels: Cold

Head

Hair color: Black
Longest of hair: Down to his chin

Eye color: Red
Added Info: Changes to Green when he is in love

Nose: Small but perfect
Cheeks: Are normal
Mouth: Normal
Lip color: Pink
Ears: Normal


Upper Body

Upper Clothing: Opened Dark Leather Overcoat, reveals Iosles Muscles


Lower Body

Lower Clothing: Dark but not too dark blue jeans, wears no socks or shoes.

Accessories

Head

Ears: Right ear has a small crystal earing, Left ear has doesn't have anything
Eyes: Dark trimmed glasses
Neck: Has a dark colored Rosary around his neck

Upper Body

Hands: Dark steel gloves tipped with little spikes on knuckle holes
Tattoos: Japanese Tattoo behind his neck meaning 'He who say not, But he is who speaks'
Rings: None
Necklaces: None

Lower Body

Has no accessories at his lower body


Personality:

Personality and more info

Attitude

Iosle is stubborn he listens only to what his heart says instead of his mind and others. Iosle would rather help out others then staying in a office working, Iosle adores to help anyone from helping eat and to anything. He lives life to the fullest and tries to help others to do so as well, he doesn't speak very often he says things by actions rather then his mouth. He never says anything unless he has something needed to be said. Iosle is also strong willed, he would never back dwon from anything if he were to fight and he could die he would fight the battle no matter what even to his own death. He would not regret it, he would do the exact same things a 100 times back to his death. He loves to fight strong people the most, he adores the thought of winning against someone with a lot of power.

Reaction:

When someone is on the urge to die from Iosle he would: Stop the fight and walk away saying "Don't die... Someone out there might love you'.

When Iosle loses and then he would fall to his knees and this is what he would usually say: Is this the end? Damn... Guess Destiny was against me and favored you.

When someone is threatening Iosle: You dare threaten me? Well... Big mistake!.: He then fights them to the death

(lol kinda lazy to do everything there so i'll stop there for now)

Skills

Descent cook
Can picklock easily
good at hiding
Can drink an entire gallon of milk in 10 seconds
Makes the scariest creepiest weirdest pictures of people



~~~ History ~~~

History: Silence encoated the woods, only the slight pitter-pattering of the rain could be hurt beating upon the roof of the log cabin. The serenity and peace was broken by the high-pitched sqeual of a woman. This woman had been carrying the child to be later named Iosle for nine months. It was time. Time for the birth of Iosle; The beginning of the end.

Iosle's mother died while giving birth, a bad omen to say the least. Iosle's father was left to raise him alone, until one night, when Iosle was six years old, his father was mysteriously murdered. Brutal stab wounds showed the crime to be one of pure hatred. The most omnious part; the doors had been locked and there was no sign of forced entry. Only one other occupant was within the house at the time of the crime; Iosle. Was he responsible? The perpetrator was never captured and it could have been the man's six year old son all along.

Iosle was placed in an orpanage and lived a normal life from then on. Once he turned sixteen, he ran as far as he could from what he had considered a 'Hell Hole of a Home'. Iosle began seeing strange monsters. As well as men and women dressed in black kimonos running around and slaying these beasts. This entertained and appealed to Iosle extremely, until on his seventeenth birthday, he could no longer hold back his desire.

Iosle let the same feelings of hatred and rage rush through his mind and body as he had done the night he murdered his father; Yes, that had been him. His father hit him one too many times and Iosle put him in his place. The resentment and rage coursing through his veins, Iosle stepped out on to the streets in search for one of these 'Hollow', as he had heard the black kimino-dressed people call them. He was foolish.

The Hollow brutally defeated Iosle, leaving him moments from death before a 'Shinigami', as the Hollow responsible, who seemed to be able to speak, had referred to them as, came and slayed the Hollow. Saving Iosle from devouration. The Shinigami had witnessed the beginning of the fight; How Iosle had intentionally started it for the thrill of it. The Shinigami felt pity for the teenage boy, however, and performed an action he knew he would regret... He sent Iosle to Soul Society.

Iosle trained for many years. Becoming stronger all the while and defeating many who stood in his quest for power. And defeating some for the sheer enjoyment of it. Then, one day, when the Current Vice-Captain of of the Eleventh Division took note of Iosle's fighting skills and his style, permitted Iosle into the Academy for Shinigami. Although having incredible speed and Shunpo skills, the top in his class, to be percise, Iosle's Kidou was mediocre. His sword-play and strength were among the best, but his reiatsu and unmatchable speed is what really stood out.

When angered, Iosle's reiatsu was monstorous, matching some of the weaker Captains' own. And his speed and Shunpo, were already on par with a Captain. After noticing Iosle's amazing strength and skill, Seireitei regretablly passed him and placed him immediately into the Eleventh Division, where he would spend the next half of his life. Although almost immediately being placed as the Third Seat, Iosle never went on missions. He spent his time training, and perfecting his skills, infact, he never even met his Captain of the time. Although focusing on all of his skills, Iosle's speed still stood out among any other.

He met a descendent of Byakuya Kuchiki, the deceased Ex-Captain of the Sixth Division. The man trained Iosle in the art of Shunpo, teaching him advanced forms, including the art of Senka, and Utsusemi. Inducing a Shunpo And Iosle's favorite, Utsusemi; Armed with these new skills, Iosle became more involved with his squad and squadmates, going on missions and completly them effortlessly. Although, their were the occasional death of his comrades that worried Central 46. Within days of hearing rumours of the promotion of his Captain, who Iosle had still never met, Iosle himself was promoted to Captain the Eleventh Division. Receiving his Captain's Haori and having the title of "Kenpachi" upon him, Central 46 had had taken all they could. They began to plot ways to terminate Iosle; He was becoming a potential threat.

Nearly a month after his promotion, Iosle had had an honor bestowed upon him; A mission from the occupants of Central 46 themselves. Their plot began. The mission was summarized as: "Iosle, there have been rumoured sightings of the Cuarta Espada in the Town of Karakura. We would like you to go there and finish him off."

Jumping into action almost instantly due to excitment, Iosle set off to Karakura. Ready to mutilate this so-caled 'Espada'.
Although, Central 46 knew he was destined to fail, for they had planned it all out. During the climax of the battle, they had a member of the Second Squad prepared to assinate Iosle, and the Espada. It was a win-win situation for them; The death of an Espada and the death of a threat to their peace.

Iosle finally stumbled upon the Cuarta and they engaged in battle. The fight raged on for hours. Maybe even days. Perhaps weeks? The fight was coming to an end. A figure emerged from the shadows, Shunpo'ing instantly and slicing Iosle, a strike meant to kill, but that was not the case. During the same Shunpo, the assassain cut down the Espada, and this srike performed it's purpose; the Espada's death.

Iosle fell to the ground, bleeding profusely and barely breathing. The lifeless corpse of the Espada fell down onto Iosle, and some of its blood leaked into Iosle's wounds. A sinister black mist-like reiatsu filled the area and Iosle's body rose; A wolf-like mask donned upon its face. Iosle's body danced wildy around the city, destroying everything in sight. Meanwhile, Iosle was locked in combat with the same Espada he just defeated. Except, this time, it was an inner-battle in the world sealed within his Zanpaktou.

The Espada, which Iosle would soon learn to be his new 'Inner-Hollow', revealed itself as 'Sougyou'. As they fought, this time in a battle for control of Iosle's body. Fifty hours had passed, and Iosle succeeded. Striking the 'Inner-Hollow' in the stomach, it slowly faded away with a warning of his inevitable return. Iosle took control of his body as the mask, which now covered eight-percent of Iosle's body, shattered. Iosle fell to the ground, exhausted. Iosle now wanders the Earth, still fighting and killing for the fun of it with the aid of his Hollow. One thing set upon his mind; "Death to Shinigami."

OOC: Is this good enough?

Well...I will approve this along as sufficient history written. And it has to be double of what you have now. No RP Sample will allow me to approve this. As long as you're history is the correct length. And your history has to make sense and tie in with everything you wrote.

ok I have edited it, hope its good enough

Indeed it is good although at little wishy-washy. No offense. I'm a harsh critic but that's my excuse for being a moderator in the first place. I know this seems like a harsh out but why did you hit enter after ever sentence to 2 sentences in a half. It's a really nice trick to appear as if there is a lot of history but if you actually created paragraphs it wouldn't be that long at all. Albeit I believe its length should be almost double your original history. I regretable have to say you need to cluster and form paragraphs. Just for length's sake. If it appears as if its not enough please edit a bit more.

And a few concendations. It's fine that you've learned Senka and other such flash step application techniques as well as other techniques (by name). However there is no need to explain what those techniques are. Sure it takes up history space...but it has nothing to do with your history. It's just a definition. Also you should assume that admins/moderators know what Senka is. If we didn't, we'd equal FAIL.

Conclusion just condense the history into ACTUAL paragraphs and add more history if the length falls short of what seems desirable. Also lose the definition or addition to phrases, terms, attacks, techniques, etc. that we as fellow bleach fans should know about.

Harsh critique but overall I did like the history ^^;. And I'll APPROVE it the instant requirements are met.

ok i have done what you asked, made paragraphs and deleted the info on techniques. Is it now accepted?

Indeed it is. APPROVED. In all honesty I was really doing it for the sake that you perhaps copied and pasted a lot of your information (in addition to the paragraph thing, definition info thing). That length in writting just proves you can actually come up with your stuff rather than copying and pasting from other sites even if the information is yours. ---As well as depict that you are a serious enough writter that is.

So sorry about the run around . Cool more vizards

Spoiler:

In any case welcome to the site. Monty 2289 (IC: Haruki Seieichi, Captain of the 13th Division; Grand Kido Commander of the Shinigami Military Kido Corps)

Now that you're approved please post the appropriate rank stats in your signature. If you need any advice on that just ask. And work on your weapon. . Again welcome!

You would have to defeat Sazu in order to get that post.

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